I love this game and I love how Miro's is written!! I almost quit before knowing there were much more than just a guy at the bar... I definitely look forward for the full game and keep up with the awesome work!! <33
this game is so FUNNN. i adore the characters, from their designs to their personality!! the sudden atmosphere changes just gives you a whiplash in the best way, i love it sm!!!!
this part will be a bit more... spoilery, but i will try to keep it vague.
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the bugs are inevitable given that it's an alpha version, like some lines are not translated from the original russian text (it's something minor, though, like one in one of the timed choices and what miro says when playing a goofy little game with the mc's hand).
looking forward for the fixes and more of the story <3
When you load your game, go to the 3rd option. Once the settings pop up, look below the orange bars (those are the text speeds, forward time, music, etc..) and then click on English. It should translate everything for you then. :)
Hello, I love your game, I'm running a community on discord about VNs, where players can feature game and get rewarded for these ! I would love to feature it there, can we connect on discord at zerobarstudio for discuss about it ?
Huh, I lived without even trying. Just honest about being shy and agreed to the dance. Too bad there wasn't an option to ask for his number, cuz I would have. He seemed nice.
I freaking love this game, and holy shit, playing it in English and suddenly getting jumpscared seeing Miro speaking in Polish was absolute cinema. I am definitely gonna be waiting for the full release of the game.
I absolutely LOVE this game so far! I haven't even gotten all the endings yet but I am smitten with Miro and his crew of "friends". I love your art style and the flow of the story, and, while one song got a copyright claim, the music is so cool and fits so well. I hope you’ll enjoy my video of my playthrough. I think I’ve made it extra silly, complete with a scale of how much Miro actually starts to piss me off. I’ve heard there are bugs but so far I haven’t found any game breaking ones, and at times I’m unsure if Miro is speaking a certain way in English or if it’s mistranslated. But it was so much fun to learn a bit of Polish in the process! Can’t wait to play more of this!! Great job!!♫♪
Я абсолютно обожаю эту игру до сих пор! Я еще даже не получил все концовки, но я влюблен в Миро и его команду «друзей». Мне нравится ваш художественный стиль и ход истории, и, хотя на одну песню поступила претензия на авторские права, музыка такая классная и так хорошо подходит. Надеюсь, вам понравится мое видео с моим прохождением. Думаю, я сделал это еще более глупо, в комплекте с масштабом того, насколько Miro на самом деле начинает меня бесить. Я слышал, что есть ошибки, но до сих пор я не нашел ни одной, ломающей игру, и иногда я не уверен, говорит ли Miro определенным образом по-английски или это неправильно переведено. Но было так весело выучить немного польского языка в процессе! Не могу дождаться, чтобы поиграть в это снова!! Отличная работа!! ♫♪
невероятная имбища!! очень классная музыка, приятная рисовка, симпатичные мужики(клаус сразу запал в сердечко, оч надеюсь с ним будет побольше взаимодействий при глобальном релизе), да и сам сюжет интересный, описания красивые, читать приятно. короче я в востороге!!
Ох ты ж боже мооой! Игра мне реально зашла, Миро стал моим ЕЩЕ ОДНИМ КРАШЕМ, Я ВЛЮБЛЕНА! С нетерпением жду выхода полной игры! Я В ВОСТОООРГЕ!!!! ЦЕЛОВАЛА РУКИ СОЗДАТЕЛЮ! (Клаус, ты дельфин)
Ема, я терь знаю из какой игры выполз мой парень.. Он полная копия Миро, даже имя похоже. Ему не хватает только шрама на глазу.. Кстати, думаю будет интересно, если в игре расскажут, откуда он у Миро (если только не уже).
Hey I played this and was SO SURPRISED!! You have such an amazing alpha build, I almost quit the game before discovering the other 90 percent of the game LOL. While I did experience some bugs especially during the timed events and a screenshot crash LOL, the game is so good, wonderful writing, you balance Miro's charm and humor so well with his terrifying side too! AND THE CGS oh my I couldn't believe this was an alpha! I played until I finished the "gallery" and every option I could but I'm sure I might've missed something due to the bugs? But either way sorry for the long message, great game and I hope to see more! Good luck!
Fajne! I enjoyed the game and I'm looking forward to what comes next!
It was better than what I was expecting. Also, I was shocked by how many scenes and option branches there are. I kept finding new ones right after I thought I saw everything. Good luck finishing all of this, it looks like a ton of work o_o.
I like the scene with the computer, it was pretty funny and Miro slides into the view in a very cute way. I really like the silly details in the background art as well.
The english translation was not very good unfortunately, I feel like I missed some context in a few moments because of it.
Other than that, it seems like your testers did not do a perfect job because I found a bunch of bugs :P
I even spotted one on the same second I launched the game - the application shows up as "{color=#ffe526}That guy pisses me off{/color}".
Clicking on the quick time event options doesn't work if clicked before the bar animation reaches 50%. (I hate scripting those bars as well, my own are sometimes bugged too but in a different way…)
A fragment of an image disappears while the kitty site is shown. (in the eng ver at least)
There were also a few untranslated sentences (but not many), though I haven’t noted down where they were. And sentences where the shake effect is used, lose random letters.
Plot-wise, I don’t really have much to suggest - you should just focus on writing out your own ideas, my only suggestion would be to consider making Miro tell MC that they could go to his house to get some metal wires or something similar, to retrieve the phone. (or say that he would call someone to get help to get it while they come to his house) Instead of making him try to calm MC down. Personally I would be too panicked to leave it like that and follow a stranger home right after. But I thought that the idea of dropping it into the drain was very smart and cool.
And I'd also advice to focus on just a few ideas at once, because if the game keeps having thousands of options, you risk overwhelming yourself and getting a burnout. While I liked most of the options they were, I wished that there could be a little less variation, but more focus on the best scenes instead. But yeah, good job! Cool game, surprisingly long as well.
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I love this game and I love how Miro's is written!! I almost quit before knowing there were much more than just a guy at the bar... I definitely look forward for the full game and keep up with the awesome work!! <33
this game is so FUNNN. i adore the characters, from their designs to their personality!! the sudden atmosphere changes just gives you a whiplash in the best way, i love it sm!!!!
this part will be a bit more... spoilery, but i will try to keep it vague.
.
.
.
.
the bugs are inevitable given that it's an alpha version, like some lines are not translated from the original russian text (it's something minor, though, like one in one of the timed choices and what miro says when playing a goofy little game with the mc's hand).
looking forward for the fixes and more of the story <3
просто... вау! новелла бесподобна!
Автор, умоляю, скажите что за песня играет в меню и что за песня играет в баре? я хочу добавить себе в плейлис
how do i get pass staying alive..? i can't seem to obtain any endings besides dancing with him and the game finishing
its still in demo so some endings may not be available and the story is not complete
you can get to the rest of the story by choosing these options when talking with Miro:
first>first>>first
that should make it enough :D
How do i get the English ver.???
Hello, I love your game, I'm running a community on discord about VNs, where players can feature game and get rewarded for these ! I would love to feature it there, can we connect on discord at zerobarstudio for discuss about it ?
Какое разнообразие языков, очень полезная игра для изучения польского! Буду советовать знакомым
Huh, I lived without even trying. Just honest about being shy and agreed to the dance. Too bad there wasn't an option to ask for his number, cuz I would have. He seemed nice.
I freaking love this game, and holy shit, playing it in English and suddenly getting jumpscared seeing Miro speaking in Polish was absolute cinema. I am definitely gonna be waiting for the full release of the game.
how do i get the english ver.?
I absolutely LOVE this game so far! I haven't even gotten all the endings yet but I am smitten with Miro and his crew of "friends". I love your art style and the flow of the story, and, while one song got a copyright claim, the music is so cool and fits so well. I hope you’ll enjoy my video of my playthrough. I think I’ve made it extra silly, complete with a scale of how much Miro actually starts to piss me off. I’ve heard there are bugs but so far I haven’t found any game breaking ones, and at times I’m unsure if Miro is speaking a certain way in English or if it’s mistranslated. But it was so much fun to learn a bit of Polish in the process! Can’t wait to play more of this!! Great job!!♫♪
Я абсолютно обожаю эту игру до сих пор! Я еще даже не получил все концовки, но я влюблен в Миро и его команду «друзей». Мне нравится ваш художественный стиль и ход истории, и, хотя на одну песню поступила претензия на авторские права, музыка такая классная и так хорошо подходит. Надеюсь, вам понравится мое видео с моим прохождением. Думаю, я сделал это еще более глупо, в комплекте с масштабом того, насколько Miro на самом деле начинает меня бесить. Я слышал, что есть ошибки, но до сих пор я не нашел ни одной, ломающей игру, и иногда я не уверен, говорит ли Miro определенным образом по-английски или это неправильно переведено. Но было так весело выучить немного польского языка в процессе! Не могу дождаться, чтобы поиграть в это снова!! Отличная работа!! ♫♪
невероятная имбища!! очень классная музыка, приятная рисовка, симпатичные мужики(клаус сразу запал в сердечко, оч надеюсь с ним будет побольше взаимодействий при глобальном релизе), да и сам сюжет интересный, описания красивые, читать приятно. короче я в востороге!!
Ох ты ж боже мооой! Игра мне реально зашла, Миро стал моим ЕЩЕ ОДНИМ КРАШЕМ, Я ВЛЮБЛЕНА! С нетерпением жду выхода полной игры! Я В ВОСТОООРГЕ!!!! ЦЕЛОВАЛА РУКИ СОЗДАТЕЛЮ! (Клаус, ты дельфин)
Ема, я терь знаю из какой игры выполз мой парень.. Он полная копия Миро, даже имя похоже. Ему не хватает только шрама на глазу.. Кстати, думаю будет интересно, если в игре расскажут, откуда он у Миро (если только не уже).
С нетерпением ждём полной версии)
Миро просто с ноги зашел в том моих любимок
Братишка поляк!!!Так еще и с вайбами парня до гроба
заверните пожалуйста
я могу смело заявить что игра может соревноваться с Парнем до гроба в охуенности
Музыка это оргазм для ушей, я зависаю слушая её
в русском переводе гг мужик или женщина
Так! я едва ли заночила прохождение и побежала писать отзыв.
Ну чо тут сказать, это... ну божественно!!история, оформление, главный антагонист, стиль рисовки, музыка - ???идеально???
(Возможные спойлеры)
А отсылка на "Boyfriend to death" в деталях образа и поведения Миро и шкал жизни и рассудка?!
Написано действительно реалистично. Музыка невероятно атмосферная и подходящая, особенно от Vessel *cheff`s kiss*.
Успехов автору в дальнейшем творчестве и создании подобных шедевров <3
попробуйте назвать гг Стрейд и получите отсылку классную
Хахах именно
Watched a playthrough of this game! Its super cool, hopefully one day you can make it acessable to mac too!
Fajne! I enjoyed the game and I'm looking forward to what comes next!
It was better than what I was expecting. Also, I was shocked by how many scenes and option branches there are. I kept finding new ones right after I thought I saw everything. Good luck finishing all of this, it looks like a ton of work o_o.
I like the scene with the computer, it was pretty funny and Miro slides into the view in a very cute way. I really like the silly details in the background art as well.
The english translation was not very good unfortunately, I feel like I missed some context in a few moments because of it.
Other than that, it seems like your testers did not do a perfect job because I found a bunch of bugs :P I even spotted one on the same second I launched the game - the application shows up as "{color=#ffe526}That guy pisses me off{/color}". Clicking on the quick time event options doesn't work if clicked before the bar animation reaches 50%. (I hate scripting those bars as well, my own are sometimes bugged too but in a different way…)
A fragment of an image disappears while the kitty site is shown. (in the eng ver at least)
There were also a few untranslated sentences (but not many), though I haven’t noted down where they were.
And sentences where the shake effect is used, lose random letters.
Plot-wise, I don’t really have much to suggest - you should just focus on writing out your own ideas, my only suggestion would be to consider making Miro tell MC that they could go to his house to get some metal wires or something similar, to retrieve the phone. (or say that he would call someone to get help to get it while they come to his house) Instead of making him try to calm MC down. Personally I would be too panicked to leave it like that and follow a stranger home right after. But I thought that the idea of dropping it into the drain was very smart and cool. And I'd also advice to focus on just a few ideas at once, because if the game keeps having thousands of options, you risk overwhelming yourself and getting a burnout. While I liked most of the options they were, I wished that there could be a little less variation, but more focus on the best scenes instead.
But yeah, good job! Cool game, surprisingly long as well.
Can't wait to see what comes next. Great work! Love the artstyle <3